BSC: Round Three Pg 11

Yep you've definitely taken a good jump this round in improvement! Your past rounds felt very straightforward, each panel felt like a splash page in a sense, that while nice looking, weren't too dynamic in view. Yet this round you've begun experimenting with different view points like the over-head view on the second page. What you've put in the panels, as far as progression, feels much clearer and more dynamic. It seems you've been getting better at making things clearer and not suffering from trying to do too much at one time like your first round. One thing I might suggest is better plannign of where speech bubbles should go, as at times they seem a bit cramped, but that may just be me.
I'm also liking Crissy's personality a lot more as you gave her more screen-time and the story you wrote has had her show more of her personality this round. Not that she hasn't previous rounds, but it was cut short each time. I'm glad you have an almost complete round for people to read and see her in action. I love how you show her determination to get back Peridot, and even being blind-sided by a giant feraligatr won't hold her back for long.
Aidan is a nice addition to the team and shows quite a bit of personality as well. He wants to do good, but is also nervous about mistakes that might be made. It was interesting seeing a bit of Crissy's past and integrating it with earning the trust of the little Glameow.
You did a pretty good job showing off Caleb's personality too, and it helps to make him sneaky and conniving when he was sweet talking her before.